5 Best Practices to Improve Your Proposal Writing

Ashley (Kayes) Floro • February 16, 2026
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Writing is such a critical component of the proposal process. Because writing for proposals is different than most other writing, it is important to understand how to craft proposal narrative that will resonate and score well with the evaluators. Well-crafted proposals will highlight your message and make it easy for the evaluator to follow our proposal’s logic and main points. That’s why it’s so important to take the time to develop well-written, well-structured proposal responses tailored to the customer and the evaluators. To help highlight your key messages and make your writing easier to score, map RFP requirements into your headings; make key selling points stand out with theme statements, feature and benefit tables, and callout boxes; break up the text so it’s more digestible; substantiate all claims and quantify where possible; and focus on the customer.


Map the RFP Requirements into Your Headings

Compliance is the first thing evaluators will look for. To make compliance clear, structure your response to the proposal instructions and the evaluation criteria. Next map to other requirements, as required. For example, in technical sections, it may be necessary to map to certain Statement of Work (SOW) or Performance Work Statement (PWS). To facilitate the evaluation further, include relevant Request for Proposal (RFP) references in your section heading titles (e.g., 2.0 Staffing Approach [L.2, M.2, C.3.1]). This will make it easier for the evaluators to find the requirements they’re looking for on their scoresheet.


Make Key Selling Points Stand Out

Another key proposal writing best practice is to make your key selling points stand out using theme statements with unique text, call-out boxes that stand out, feature and benefit tables that highlight strengths, and action captions that highlight the key takeaways of associated graphics. This will help the evaluators visually locate the key strengths of your approach and the resulting benefits so that they can more easily transfer those items to their scoresheets.


Theme Statements.  Theme statements set the stage for the section and grab the evaluator’s attention because they address an issue that is important to the customer. The ideal theme statement not only presents a solution feature that addresses a customer hot button, it also articulates clear, quantified benefits. I recommend including a theme statement for every first-level section and second-level subsection and formatting those themes to stand out from the rest of the text. If you theme effectively, the theme statements will show up as identified strengths in the evaluation debrief from the customer.


Feature Benefit Tables. Feature and benefit tables are another great way to help evaluators find proposal strengths. Similar to theme statements, feature and benefit tables highlight major solution features—which ideally address customer hot buttons—and articulate clear, quantified benefits. Typically, customers want things cheaper, faster, and/or better, which you might express as low cost, low risk, high quality, efficient, and/or effective. Use feature and benefit tables in each major section introduction to highlight the key elements of your approach. This could be every first-level section for shorter proposals but may be extended to each second-level subsection for longer proposals.


Callout Boxes. Using callout boxes will help your major proof points stand out for the evaluators. To make proof points even more effective, make sure to provide the “so what?” statement. For example, it’s not enough simply to state: "We have used our proven staffing process to staff programs with 3-, 7- and 14-day turnaround times, including the MNOP program, where we staffed 15 FTEs in two weeks." Ask yourself, “So what? What does this mean for my customer?” This might prompt you to add: "Leveraging this staffing process, we provide Customer ABC with low-risk task order start-up and delivery for large, small, short-term, and long-term requirements."


Action Captions.  Action captions help the reader understand the meaning of the graphic and serve to sell the approach. They are another great way to highlight the strengths of your approach. Action captions should include a key feature and customer benefit that are highlighted in the graphic.


Break Up Text with Graphics

Graphics are key to effective proposal writing and consist of visuals such as: charts, drawings, maps, photographs, tables, and callout boxes. If used correctly, graphics are compelling, easy to understand, informative, and help to communicate your message faster and more clearly than words alone. Research shows that readers recall about 10 percent of what they read only, whereas they recall nearly 70 percent of what they both read and see. Graphics can help evaluators to easily read data, understand processes, and identify patterns or potential opportunities. Graphics also serve to visually break up the text and make the narrative more digestible for the evaluators. If used properly, graphics can help you to more effectively communicate information as well as save space since they typically also receive some font size relief.


Substantiate All Claims and Quantify

To further strengthen your message, you should also aim to substantiate all claims, quantifying where possible. Unsubstantiated claims negate the credibility of the proposal response. Instead using empty words such as “high,” “numerous,” and “highly reliable,” use quantified metrics instead. For example, rather than writing, “ABC consistently received high award fees,” you might write, “ABC consistently received award fee scores between 90 and 95 percent.” By adding proof statements as evidence and backing up your claims with facts and figures, you provide the necessary proof to validate our solution with the evaluator. Quantifying your substantiation points can make your content even more credible. However, take care not to be too specific: 20% will be perceived with more confidence than 22.4%, which may raise questions of validity.


Focus on the Customer

When we write proposals, we tend to tout our team and our solution. We tell the customer how great we are and describe the terrific solution we are delivering. However, this is not a customer-focused approach. Instead, proposals should be about how the customer’s needs are met by our solution and the benefits the customer receives. Bottom line: the focus should be on the customer, not us.


Put Them First—Literally.  One of the easiest ways to make your proposal content more customer focused is to put them first—literally. Instead of saying, “Team ABC’s solution delivers a low-risk transition,” flip the construction and write, “Customer A receives a low-risk transition with our comprehensive transition approach.” The two sentences convey the same overall message, but by putting the customer first in the sentence, you shift the focus onto what the customer is receiving rather than what you are delivering.


Use Their Name More Than Yours.  Another easy way to make your proposal content more customer focused is to use the customer’s name more frequently than your company or team name. Try this quick test. Hit Ctrl-F and search for the number of times you mention your company and/or team name. Then search for the number of times you mention the customer’s name. You should aim to mention the customer’s name more times than yours. If you find that you have mentioned the customer far less frequently, revise your text to focus more on the customer and the benefits they will receive by choosing your solution.


Speak Their Language. Be sure to use the customer’s terminology and lexicon in your proposal to gain their confidence. By knowing your customer and speaking their language, you demonstrate that you understand them and begin to establish trust. What’s more, your customer evaluators often do key word searches to find what’s important to them in your proposal. Make sure all sections include key words from the instructions, evaluation criteria, and the SOW/PWS.


Final Thoughts

Poorly-written proposals can obscure your message and make it difficult for evaluators to follow your proposal’s logic and main points. If we’re sloppy and careless in our proposal presentation, the customer can only assume that you will be similarly careless and sloppy in your contract delivery. Following these proposal best practices can help you to present our ideas clearly and comprehensively, in a way that can be easily understood and scored by the evaluators. In addition to making your proposal easier to score, strong writing can contribute to your company’s credibility in the eyes of the evaluator—which can certainly help improve your chances of winning overall.



Originally published at Proposal Reflections.


Shows requests for information (RFIs) becoming more important
By Ashley (Kayes) Floro, CPP APMP May 5, 2026
In government contracting, the pre-solicitation phase is where requirements are shaped, vendor relationships get established, and acquisition strategies get set. Experienced teams know this, which is why they invest heavily in customer engagement, competitive intelligence, and capture planning long before a Request for Proposal (RFP) is released. But one pre-solicitation activity has historically been undervalued: the Request for Information (RFI). That's changing fast, and contractors who haven't noticed are already behind. RFIs: No Longer Just Market Research The traditional view of RFIs is simple: agencies issue them to gather information about industry capabilities before drafting a solicitation. That definition no longer captures what's happening in the current procurement landscape. Today, agencies use RFIs to define and refine requirements, test the feasibility of solutions, identify capable vendors early, and reduce the risk of poorly structured procurements. RFIs aren't just gathering information anymore, they're shaping the acquisition itself. Why Agencies Are Leaning into RFIs Several forces are pushing agencies toward deeper pre-solicitation engagement with industry, with a noticeable emphasis on RFIs. Increasing complexity. Emerging technologies and evolving mission needs mean agencies often don't know what the right solution looks like. The Government needs industry input to understand what's possible. Budget pressure. With tighter budgets and greater oversight, agencies must justify acquisition strategies earlier. RFIs let the Government validate assumptions before committing funds. Risk reduction. Poorly defined requirements lead to protests, delays, and costly rework. Getting it right before the RFP saves the Government time, money, and credibility. The result: more consequential work is happening before the RFP is ever released, and RFIs are holding more weight. The Strategic Opportunity Contractors Are Missing For contractors, this shift changes when and how opportunities are won. Responding to an RFI is no longer a courtesy or a branding exercise. It's a chance to shape how the problem is framed, introduce alternative approaches, position your capabilities as the benchmark, and influence evaluation criteria before they're finalized. Organizations that engage early often help define the playing field. By the time the RFP drops, those who sat out may find themselves reacting to requirements that already favor someone else. The Bar Is Rising RFIs are also becoming more structured. Agencies increasingly use standardized response templates, form-based submissions, and structured data collection—making it easier to compare vendors side by side. This raises the stakes for how you respond. Vague answers and marketing language don't land in structured formats. Clear, specific, well-supported responses stand out and are far more likely to influence the outcome. What To Do About It Organizations serious about win rates need to rethink how they treat RFIs: not as optional, but as strategic. This means being selective but intentional about which RFIs to pursue, aligning RFI responses with your broader capture strategy, and focusing on insight rather than just information. The goal isn't simply to answer the questions being asked: it's to shape the questions that will appear in the RFP. Final Thoughts RFIs are not new, but their role in government contracting is changing in meaningful ways. RFIs have become a critical touchpoint where agencies and industry collaborate to define problems, explore solutions, and reduce acquisition risk. For contractors, they represent one of the earliest, and most valuable, opportunities to influence an outcome. The organizations that recognize this, and act on it, are the ones best positioned to win.
By Ashley (Kayes) Floro, CPP APMP March 30, 2026
When was the last time your team truly examined why you won—or lost—a proposal? Every submission your team makes, win or lose, contains a roadmap for doing better next time. Yet many organizations treat each proposal as a standalone event, moving quickly from one bid to the next without pausing to reflect on what worked, what didn't, and why. This is a costly mistake. A structured lessons learned program, built into every stage of the business development lifecycle, is one of the most powerful tools a company can use to sharpen its competitive edge. What many organizations overlook is that some of the most valuable lessons come directly from the customer. Internal assessments are important, but they only tell part of the story. Customer debriefs provide a rare opportunity to understand how the Government evaluated your solution, what aspects of your proposal resonated, where evaluators perceived risk, and how your approach compared to the competition. When combined with internal lessons learned efforts, debriefs can uncover strategic insights that dramatically improve future capture and proposal performance. Conducting Lessons Learned Conducting lessons learned after each proposal submission is a critical part of the business development lifecycle. It helps companies understand where they are excelling and where they need to improve. To ensure the experience is fresh in everyone's mind, each member of the proposal team should document their impressions—both positive and negative—within the first week after submission. Sample questions to consider include: Was the proposal development schedule reasonable and realistic? Why or why not? Were there any bottlenecks or major issues? If so, what were they, and how could they be mitigated in the future? Did the team work well together? If not, how could team dynamics have been improved? How effective was communication among the team? What went well? What could have been improved? Did any unexpected problems occur during proposal development? If so, how could they be mitigated going forward? Did the team stay within its B&P budget? If not, what could have been done differently? What worked best during the capture and proposal effort? What areas require improvement? A practical way to gather and analyze this feedback is to send a survey to each team member using an automated tool, which makes it easier to collate and compare responses. Just as importantly, organizations should ensure lessons learned discussions extend beyond proposal operations and include capture, pricing, solutioning, staffing, and customer engagement activities. Many proposal losses are rooted in issues that occurred long before writing ever began. Request a Customer Debrief Too often, companies only request debriefs after a loss, missing valuable opportunities to learn from wins as well. Winning debriefs can reveal why the customer selected your solution, which strengths carried the most weight, and where evaluators still saw weaknesses or risk despite awarding your team the contract. Those insights can be invaluable for recompetes and future pursuits. When requesting a debrief from the Government, professionalism matters. Requests should be submitted promptly, kept concise, and focused on understanding the evaluation rather than challenging it. The objective is not to argue with the customer, but to gain insight into how the proposal was perceived and evaluated. During the debrief itself, the most productive teams ask thoughtful, strategic questions such as: What proposal strengths had the greatest impact on the evaluation? Were there areas where the Government perceived increased risk? How well did the proposed approach align with the agency’s priorities? What differentiated the winning proposal? Were there areas where the proposal appeared compliant but not sufficiently tailored? Did the Government identify any gaps in customer understanding? The best debriefs often reveal issues that are not immediately obvious in evaluation scores alone. A technically compliant proposal may still fail because it lacked clear differentiation, did not sufficiently address customer pain points, or failed to inspire confidence in execution. Those insights are essential for improving future capture and proposal strategies. Equally important, organizations should approach debriefs as relationship-building opportunities. Agencies remember contractors that engage professionally, ask intelligent questions, and demonstrate a genuine commitment to improvement. After Action Report Once the feedback has been gathered, the Proposal Manager should review the trends and prepare an After Action Report that details lessons learned, root causes, and recommended next steps. This report should be shared with the full proposal team to ensure that insights are carried forward into future efforts. The most effective After Action Reports do more than document tactical issues. They identify whether the team’s overall strategy aligned with the customer’s priorities. Did the proposed discriminators truly differentiate the solution? Did the proposal clearly communicate customer understanding? Were there areas where the team assumed the customer valued something that ultimately had little impact on the evaluation? Answering these questions helps organizations move beyond surface-level process improvements and make meaningful strategic adjustments. Lessons Learned Session Additionally, after contract award is announced, the team should conduct a formal Lessons Learned Session to document and discuss observations, findings, and conclusions—win or lose. This session should incorporate both internal feedback and customer debrief information whenever possible. By understanding where the team encountered roadblocks, where the customer found gaps in the response, and what elements of the solution resonated most strongly, organizations can strengthen both their processes and their competitive positioning. Equally important: identify what the team is doing well and make sure those practices are preserved and repeated. Analyzing Trends and Updating Standard Operating Procedures (SOPs) Conducting lessons learned after each proposal is valuable, but the benefit compounds when you step back and look at the bigger picture. On an annual basis, review your After Action Reports, customer debrief notes, and lessons learned sessions as a body of work, and analyze them for recurring themes and patterns. As the year wraps up, whether you follow a corporate fiscal year or the calendar year, ask your team: What challenges keep surfacing? Where does the team consistently perform well? What issues repeatedly appear in customer debriefs? Are evaluators consistently identifying the same weaknesses or risks? Are there gaps in capture execution, customer engagement, staffing, or pricing strategy? Discussing and sharing these trends with your team creates a culture of transparency and accountability, and helps focus improvement efforts where they matter most. More importantly, translate those findings into action by updating your business development and proposal SOPs. If internal feedback shows the team is consistently scrambling during production, adjust your SOPs to launch the production process earlier. If customer debriefs repeatedly cite a lack of customer understanding, take a hard look at your capture process and strengthen your call plan execution. If evaluators consistently identify transition risk or staffing concerns, revisit your solution development and recruiting strategies. Continuously refining your processes in response to real data, especially direct customer feedback, is one of the clearest paths to improved performance and more wins. Final Thoughts Every organization in this industry wants to win more, and win rates are often cited as the headline measure of a business development organization's health. While they are a useful starting point, win rates alone don't tell the whole story. Too many variables influence any single outcome. What matters more is building the discipline to learn from every effort, regardless of the result. A consistent lessons learned program, paired with customer debrief analysis, annual trend reviews, and a willingness to update your processes, creates a feedback loop that makes your team sharper over time. The companies that win consistently aren't just the ones with the best writers or the biggest budgets, they're the ones that systematically learn faster than their competitors. Every proposal, whether it results in a win or a loss, provides an opportunity to improve. The organizations that capitalize on those opportunities are the ones that steadily build stronger capture strategies, stronger proposals, and ultimately, stronger win rates over time.
By Ashley (Kayes) Floro, CPP APMP March 25, 2026
Tight page limitations are continuing to be a challenge as contracting officers streamline their acquisition processes. When faced with tight page restrictions, we often find ourselves struggling with trimming five pages of material into two pages of allocated space. However, sometimes the content we are working with is so long because it is simply overly wordy. In this article, I present six tricks for eliminating waste. 1. Use Active Voice With active voice, the subject of the sentence comes first and performs the action in the sentence. Active voice is more straightforward and concise than passive voice. It typically results in shorter, sharper sentences. So not only does it take up less real estate, it flows better and is easier to understand. Passive: It was decided by the Program Manager to streamline the program. Active, Strong Verb: The Program Manager streamlined the program. 2. Eliminate Redundancies Remove redundancies that take up extra space and don’t add value. I present some examples below.